I'm like a [[Fire]] cracker, I make it [[Hot]]

[N.emesis]

What am I doing here?
There's nothing here for me.
Why am I still here?
I swear I was on my way home,
When I saw you.

You brightened up the day,
Made it worthwhile.
Come, walk with me,
Stay a while.
Please?

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Nemesis stood dejectedly under a tree. There was a good many reasons for his depression, and it wasn't only the weather. He'd left his herdland, Raiden, under the watch of his beta, Peter Pan, hoping to find some new herd members. After all, even the leaders got sick of only being around their beta, who was also a stallion at some point. Shaking his sodden forelock, he lifted his head slightly and decided to return to Raiden.

Letting out a long, depressed sigh, he began walking toward the border of the Loner's Peak and into his territory. He'd been here for a day and a half, so Peter Pan would be expecting him back soon. Splashing through a mud puddle, he clamped his tail down against the driving rain. When he had first come to this public land, he had certainly expected it to be a little fuller. Then again, he was always wrong about things like that, so it didn't really matter.

As he walked, head down so far it was almost brushing the floor, he began wondering how long it would be until his herd actually began to grow. He had almost reached the border when he heard hoofbeats.

"Stop kidding yourself! There's no-one here but you!" He told himself sternly. But then,

thud, thud, thud

There was no mistaking the rhythmic hoofbeats, so he stopped and waited for the horse responsible for the noise to turn up.

Let's just hope it's a mare this time!
He thought desperately to himself. He was cold, tired, and was most certainly not in the mood for another time-wasting stallion to turn up and start annoying him. A mare, on the other hand, he had time for, if only to make her join his herd. He would not use force, oh no, he would use his expert seduction skills. He knew what he wanted and he knew how to get it. What could go wrong?[/color]

[Maggie]

I don't know if I can yell any louder,
how many times have I kicked you out of here.
I've said something insulting;
I can be so mean when I wanna be.
Im incapable of anything.
I can cut you into peices when my heart is broke.


Ebony tendrals drifted into the open air above, the only obstacles were the falling aqua droplets releasing from the heavens. Her dished features were something to be eye catching, her petite bodice graceful and elegant something anyone would be taunted by. Though there was much more to this beautiful creature who sauntered into public lands. Her dark hide covered in dew drops as the rain lightened up somewhat above. Unfortunetly the land was being rained on constantly and yet she didn't mind.

Her darkening pools looked up toward the rumbling storm clouds who threatened to spill a mighty set of rain from above. Her front daggers lifting ever so lightly off the ground be she let them settle upon its mud stricken grounds. She sighed with contentment as she let the rain pour down her features, feeling free and coragous if only she felt like this more often.

Her sides heaved in and out, as she breathed in its deep scents only then realizing she had company near by. Her onyx pools looked towards a brute, standing nearby. His head lowered in defeat or depression as he began to sulk away. Her auds pricked towards him her neck arched lovely in frame as if she had planned on looking that stunning.

[N.emesis]

[[OOC: By the way, he's a Clydesdale X TB, so he's pretty thick-set, if you ever need to refer to his size, etc]]


[[BIC:]] Nemesis looked up when the hoofbeats stopped to see a mare, and a very pretty one at that, looking at him. Immediatly lifting his head, he walked towards her. Stopping a few strides away from her face, he watched her to see what she would do next.

"Well hello m'lady. What are you doing out here on such a miserable day? I would have thought that a mare like you would be at the head of a herd, warm and dry!" Nemesis shifted into a more comfortable position before carrying on, "
I'm sorry, I must have left my manners up a tree today. My name is Nemesis. Could I have the privelige of knowing your name, perhaps?"

[[Uuuurgh, rubbish post...I have used all my muse on the first post...]]

[Maggie]

[kay and its fine, my muse isn't much good right now either xD]

Her ebony tendrals fell upon her features, her forelocks wisp blowing swiftly through the open winds. The brute began to walk towards her, noticing her presence he stood only a few strides away from her enough so that she didn't feel invaded. Well hello m'lady. What are you doing out here on such a miserable day? I would have thought that a mare like you would be at the head of a herd, warm and dry! The beast shifted his weight expressing his inpressive build.

His sturdy set much larger than that of the ebon femmine petite build of the maiden, I'm sorry, I must have left my manners up a tree today. My name is Nemesis. Could I have the privelige of knowing your name, perhaps? He asked his baritone voice making the maidens auds prick forward to hear him out. She smiled sweetly, her velvetine maw curling into a gentle smile towards the brutes kind words.

It is quite alright, she replied with a nod to his words. It is a pleasure to meet you Nemesis, my calling is Moniet. Her sweeter voice chimed melodice as it drifted in the wind towards the brute. His large set seeming to be quite impressive to the femmines eye as she watched his muscles tense and buldge through his pelt.

[N.emesis]

"Moniet? What a pretty name. But then, I suppose it's only fitting for a mare as pretty as you."

Nemesis flashed a quick smile, before sidling closer.
"I take it you don't have a herd? Because if you don't, there's a place for you in my herd."

[Maggie]

Moniet? What a pretty name. But then, I suppose it's only fitting for a mare as pretty as you. He spoke flirtatious, the onyx femmine looked towards him a sweet smile plastered on her velvetine maw. He had a way with words, she noticed. The brute flashed a smile before he slid closer towards her, thank you. She replied her eyelashes batted flirtatiously as she arched her neck in a beautiful frame only fit for a well bred species which she wasn't surprisingly.

I take it you don't have a herd? Because if you don't, there's a place for you in my herd. He spoke and the femmine shifted her weight, she knew steeds like him always looking for herd members to round up just to make their herd seem the best, the strongest the greatest. She sighed looking up towards him her dark pools taking a second glance at is marvolous muscles and features.

I'm not sure quite yet, where do you reside? She replied sweet her velvetine reaching out towards him before pulling back eyeing him a little more. If he really wanted her he'd have to work to get her she wasn't just a pretty face.

[N.emesis]

Let's walk a little more,
Stay a little longer.
Drive away the rain clouds,
Make the sun come out.

It can't be time for you to go!
We've only just begun,
Let's have just a lil' more fun.

But now it's getting dark,
And your family is calling,
As we dance that strange dance of ours.

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"Ah, yes. I reside in Raiden, a territory not far from here. I am the leader - My friend, Peter Pan, is the beta.

He watched her move her head toward him, then pull it back and look over him again. He snorted gently and moved beneath the shelter of the trees, for it was starting to rain harder now.

Flashing her another quick smile, he flicked his tail, asking her to join him.

"Why not come under here? It's not so wet. I mean, unless you like getting soaked to the bone?"

A sarcastic smile tugged at the corners of his mouth as he shifted from foot to foot, trying to warm up his cold muscles.[/size][/font]

[Maggie]

Ah, yes. I reside in Raiden, a territory not far from here. I am the leader - My friend, Peter Pan, is the beta. Moniet shifted her weight, the rain pouring down harder now. She reasoned in her mind, could she really trust him? His bodice began to move away and she watched him with a questioning gaze was he leaving? Though before she could speak he turned around giving her a quick smile Why not come under here? It's not so wet. I mean, unless you like getting soaked to the bone? He replied sarcastically and she smiled back at him.

She stood there for a moment as her headress looked upwards towards the heaven taking in the raindrops before her hooves began to gently rise up and down, as she trotted in a graceful pace to the larger steed. So you are Raiden's leader as you say? I've never been to your terrain before tell me about it. She smiled sweetly as she halted under the covering of trees as the rain began to pour down overhead. How long would this downpour of rain showers over the land last?

[N.emesis]

And now I have to go,
My family's calling,
I'm expected.

But why do I have to go back so soon?
There's only me,
There's nothing to do!

Why don't you come with me?
And we can walk and play,
Stay with me,
Please?

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Nemesis settled down, and began telling her about his land.

"Well, there's plenty of rainfall, the grass is green and healthy most of the year, there is plenty of water and it's very private because it's in a valley. (I think?) There is plenty of space to run and frolick for the foals, and the only danger to them is the fact that the river running through the middle of the territory is a little deep. For the grown ups, there is all the grass you can eat and protection from other stallions and predators."

"Also, when I'm gone, Peter Pan will take over the herd until I get back, so there will be constant protection, not just when I'm there. In the middle of the territory there is a small "forest", almost, where the trees grow so close together that rain cannot penetrate. When the weather is like this," he said, glancing up at the grey sky, "we can live there for days, maybe even weeks because of the grass and the river which just happens to cut through the forest. Is this starting to sound good?"

He stopped talking and looked at her, hoping she had heard enough, because he was eager to get back to Raiden.
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[Maggie]

[i'm sorry i'll reply soon! i'm on vacation so i don't have time to reply right now but i promise i'll reply when i return sometime tonight or tomorrow! thanks hun <3]